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by dougdigdag
Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:47 pm
Forum: Older Betas
Topic: Typos and Comments
Replies: 11
Views: 34948

Re: Typos and Comments

In beta 3, on the inner asteroid of the Beothatch(?) system, at the nav marker at 0 X 0: "a forest with several PATHWAY stretching out" should be "a forest with several PATHWAYS stretching out". As an aside, I think that the term "pictorial images" may be somewhat redundant. Also, part of the text o...
by dougdigdag
Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:40 pm
Forum: Older Betas
Topic: Typos and Comments
Replies: 11
Views: 34948

Re: Typos and Comments

In beta 3, on the abandoned pirate base at 122N x 115W on the asteroid in the home system: "He should discover IT'S exact location soon" should perhaps be changed to "ITS exact location" (with no apostrophe), though since the speaker is presumably a Velox perhaps the error is intentional.
by dougdigdag
Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:15 pm
Forum: Older Betas
Topic: Typos and Comments
Replies: 11
Views: 34948

Re: Typos and Comments

In beta 3: "You can't carry ANYMORE new item types" should be "You can't carry ANY MORE new item types" (with a space).